I appreciate critiques and comments and whatnot, but if you can't infer what a double-shot screwdriver is, you need to go back to picture books.
I've been finding comments on what's hard to understand useful, but at the same time, it's hard to figure out what actually needs explanation when something as mundane as a screwdriver confuses them.
I'm guessing the person wasn't very old, like 15 maybe, because the context was drinking in a bar.
The site, critters.org, isn't as useful as I thought it'd be. I like it, because I like to critique fiction, but getting critiques on the other hand is not that great. Some of it's been helpful and I've made a lot of major revisions after a few things were brought to my attention.
Amusing annoyances
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"Final Draft = Rough Draft - 20%" - Stephen King
The site, critters.org, isn't as useful as I thought it'd be. I like it, because I like to critique fiction, but getting critiques on the other hand is not that great. Some of it's been helpful and I've made a lot of major revisions after a few things were brought to my attention.
Or, two ounces (or so) of vodka in some fresh squeezed. Who knows, really?
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"Final Draft = Rough Draft - 20%" - Stephen King
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